Present simple: I have a car  past simple: I cooked dinner Future simple: I will buy a new dress Present continuous: I’m listening to music now Past continuous: I was wasting time Future continuous: I will be sleeping when they come Present perfect: I’ve (2024)

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DeerDOOK

28 Nov 2020

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Liiiaa

28 Nov 2020

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Looks good except I’d like to make a few changes.Where you have: “Past perfect: I had bought a car, before you called me and congratulation me”-Change “you called me and congratulation me” to “you called to congratulate me” (because that’s why the person called, to congratulate you!)Then where you have: “Past perfect continuous: I had been sleeping, you called me” add “when” before the you. So it should look like: “I had been sleeping, WHEN you called me”Where you have: “Future perfect continuous: I will have been singing the song for twenty minutes by the time The conversation is started” change “by the time The conversation is started” to “by the time the conversation started” Where you have: “Past simple: The song was listened” change it to “The song was listened TO”Where you have: “Past continuous: The tv was being worked all day” add “on” after worked. So it should look like “The tv was being worked ON all day” Where you have: “Present perfect: The song has already been listened” add “to” after listened. So it would look like “The song has already been listened TO”I’m not sure what you meant by: “Past perfect: Her statement had already been wither on tv, when she finished her speech” Lastly where you said: “I did a little work and could you wanna check me out?” change it to “I did a little work, could you check me out?”Notice that these are tiny mistakes here and there which means your English is close to being perfect! Great job! 😊

Looks good except I’d like to make a few changes.

Where you have: “Past perfect: I had bought a car, before you called me and congratulation me”
-Change “you called me and congratulation me” to “you called to congratulate me” (because that’s why the person called, to congratulate you!)

Then where you have: “Past perfect continuous: I had been sleeping, you called me” add “when” before the you. So it should look like: “I had been sleeping, WHEN you called me”

Where you have: “Future perfect continuous: I will have been singing the song for twenty minutes by the time The conversation is started” change “by the time The conversation is started” to “by the time the conversation started”

Where you have: “Past simple: The song was listened” change it to “The song was listened TO”

Where you have: “Past continuous: The tv was being worked all day” add “on” after worked. So it should look like “The tv was being worked ON all day”

Where you have: “Present perfect: The song has already been listened” add “to” after listened. So it would look like “The song has already been listened TO”

I’m not sure what you meant by: “Past perfect: Her statement had already been wither on tv, when she finished her speech”

Lastly where you said: “I did a little work and could you wanna check me out?” change it to “I did a little work, could you check me out?”

Notice that these are tiny mistakes here and there which means your English is close to being perfect! Great job! 😊

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DeerDOOK

29 Nov 2020

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@Liiiaa Thank you for your help!

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Present simple: I have a car past simple: I cooked dinner Future simple: I will buy a new dress Present continuous: I’m listening to music now Past continuous: I was wasting time Future continuous: I will be sleeping when they come Present perfect: I’ve (2024)

Looks good except I’d like to make a few changes.

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Present simple: I have a car  past simple: I cooked dinner Future simple: I will buy a new dress Present continuous: I’m listening to music now Past continuous: I was wasting time Future continuous: I will be sleeping when they come Present perfect: I’ve (2024)